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This is a real personal statement written by a student for their university application. It might help you decide what to include in your own. There are lots more examples in our . |
I’ve always been fascinated with computer systems and networking. I taught myself the C programming language at age 16, and installed my first Linux distribution at age 17. This motivation drew me to study my bachelors degree in Computer Science and Artificial Intelligence at X University, and to work in the industry for five years after graduation.
While taking the degree course, I became interested in distributed systems and network programming, and took Distributed Systems as my specialist course option in the third year. We were given an academic paper on Distributed Hash Tables, a broken Java implementation of DHTs, and the course assignment was to fix the implementation. I found this really interesting, and so for my third year project, I built a distributed system in Java for a local software company.
After university, I worked as a web application developer, before moving on to the IT/systems side of things, where I administrated Linux systems and web application servers, including a high availability Java web application cluster. Most recently I worked full-time as a build and configuration engineer on enterprise-level Java application stacks for Y bank.
My reasons for application; I wish to learn about distributed systems at a very detailed level, so that I may one day be able to design and implement them as a systems architect. I am currently undertaking independent study towards my Z certification to further this goal, and studying to refresh my Java knowledge, while employed part-time in remote Linux server administration work.
Reviewer comment:
- Great opening paragraph to show enthusiasm in computer science and give examples of this
- Good section on relevant work experience as it shows the interest of the applicant
- Final paragraph sums up interest well but some grammar mistakes in first sentence
- Could do with more on skills and explanations of their interest
- Can expand work experience to go into what the applicant learned and link it to their application for the master’s course
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Successful Personal Statement Example For Computer Science At Oxford
Last Updated: 6th April 2022
Author: Rob Needleman
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Welcome to our popular Personal Statement series where we present an example of a successful Personal Statement, and our Oxbridge Tutors provide their feedback on it.
Today, we are looking through a Computer Science applicant’s Personal Statement that helped secure a place at Oxford University. The Computer Science Course at Oxford is about understanding computer systems and networks at a deep level. Read on to see how this excellent Personal Statment gives attention to the mathematical side of Computer Science and showcases their achievements.
Here’s a breakdown of the Personal Statement (the applicant came very close to the 4,000 character limit):
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The universities this candidate applied to were the following:
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Example Computer Science Personal Statement
My first experiences with mathematics throughout school were always enjoyable but not inspiring. While I loved working with maths, and enjoyed representing our school in both the UKMT and Hans Woyda team competitions, I felt that maths could not be the end-in-itself the school syllabus presented it as. As I progressed through secondary education, however, I began to really see it as the powerful tool to understand and structure reality that it is.
The first time I saw that my interpretation of the use of maths had some substance was during a work experience placement I organised at IMSO (International Mobile Satellite Organization). There I encountered some examples of the mathematical and computing problems involved in working with satellites: from the difference between the Euclidean geometry on a map and the Elliptical geometry on a globe, to the logistics of moving satellites around to meet demand while keeping them in orbit. These were problems that demanded much more than mere number crunching, and being exposed to this gave me a taste of what maths beyond school might involve. A second work experience spell at Siemens provided me a much more in-depth view of the important role that communication systems play in keeping a company running efficiently and effectively.
My passion for mathematics and computing was further extended while reading ‘The Magical Maze’ by Ian Stewart. The description of maths as the exploration of a maze of our own creation had an incredibly profound effect on my understanding of what research in mathematics involves. What interested me especially was the visual part of resolving problems, so that they did not rely completely on resolving long calculations. This was close to how I like to understand and explain my ideas in mathematics.
Douglas Hofstadter’s ‘Gödel, Escher, Bach’ gave me a much deeper understanding of the axiomatic systems that make up maths and how parallels can be drawn between different subjects to gain a further understanding of them all. Connected by the theme of Gödel’s Incompleteness Theorem, the author passes through seemingly unrelated topics, such as the problem of consciousness and the mathematics of Zen principles, to explain the theorem. Although not the focus of the book, I have also enjoyed reading the links that are presented between maths and computing; it seems to me that maths is not just related to computing – computing is the physical manifestation of mathematics.
Maths and computing are about describing mental processes in a precise, logical way. The rigour required for mathematical proof leaves little room for subjectivity: something can be proven, disproven or unproven, but this depends completely on the validity of your logic. The idea of being able to extract order from apparent chaos, working through concepts until they click is what I love about these subjects, and what has attracted me to take those as an integral part of my further education.
However passionate I am about my academic studies, I also enjoy being involved in extracurricular activities. As head of mentoring and a prefect, I have improved my organizational abilities working with staff and mentors in developing study programmes for those students requiring extra help. Completing the Duke of Edinburgh bronze award – now working on the silver award – has allowed me to practice and develop my leadership and teamwork skills.
In my spare time I enjoy playing tennis, skiing and swimming; the latter I practice at competition level. I also love travelling, as having spent my childhood in Denmark, Egypt, United Kingdom and Spain has given me a hunger for mixing with different cultures. I like to unwind by playing the piano – I find that the pleasure one derives from making a piece your own is one that few activities can match.
I am thrilled about the prospect of further study in these subjects with some of the leading professors in the fields, and look forward to participating in university life.
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Good Points Of The Personal Statement
This is a well-written, structured statement. The student explains their reasons to pursue a dual-honours degree and gives equal attention to both disciplines to which they are applying. The student adds personality to the statement by thoroughly explaining their own views on all of the examples of literature read around maths and computing.
Bad Points Of The Personal Statement
There are quite a lot of short paragraphs. The student could have saved space by consolidating some paragraphs into one, hence shortening the statement. The student starts three paragraphs with ‘My’ or ‘In my’. This is quite repetitive. There are too many paragraphs, seven in total. Paragraphs five and six could be shortened and grouped into one paragraph. In the third paragraph, it appears as though the student has either forgotten to add an addition space (in order to start a new paragraph) or has incorrectly started a new line for the sentence ‘Douglas Hofstadter’s…’.
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This is a very good statement. The student has clearly achieved a lot and writes in a clear and easy-to-understand way. Attention is given to both maths and computer sciences, which is essential as the student is applying for a dual honours course. With some restructuring, this could be an excellent statement.
This Personal Statement for Computer Science is a great example of how to tackle applying to two different degrees or dual honours. The candidate’s interest and achievements are clearly shown which is vital to Admissions Tutors.
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Computer Science Personal Statement (Guide + Examples!)
Applying to study computer science can be quite a complicated programs. There are so many programs out there with so many application requirements. But don’t worry, we’re here to help.
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What Is a computer science personal statement?
A computer science personal statement is a document that you submit as part of your application to study computer science.
In this statement, you’ll need to talk about your motivation for wanting to study computer science, as well as your skills and experience . This is your chance to sell yourself to the admissions committee and demonstrate why you’re the perfect candidate for their program.
Anatomy of a personal statement
Now that we’ve covered what a computer science personal statement is, let’s take a look at what it should include.
1. Introduction
2. your motivation for wanting to study computer science.
In this section, you’ll need to explain your motivation for wanting to study computer science. What is it about computer science that interests you? What are your long-term career aspirations? This is your chance to sell yourself to the admissions committee and demonstrate your commitment to the subject.
3. Your skills and experience
In this section, you’ll need to talk about your skills and experience . What computer science-related courses have you taken? Do you have any industry experience? This is your chance to show the admissions committee that you have the skills and experience necessary to succeed in their program.
4. Conclusion
Who reads my computer science personal statement.
The computer science personal statement is read by the admissions committee of the computer science department to which you’re applying.
How long should my computer science personal statement be?
Your computer science personal statement should be between 500 and 1000 words . This is enough space for you to introduce yourself, talk about your motivation for wanting to study computer science, and discuss your skills and experience.
What should I include in my computer science personal statement?
Some things that you may want to include in your computer science personal statement are:
Your personal statement may also include other information that you feel is important for the admissions committee to know about you. However, make sure that whatever you include is relevant to computer science and will help you stand out as a strong candidate.
What should I not write in my computer science personal statement?
Second, avoid including information that is not relevant to computer science . The admissions committee is looking for evidence that you’re passionate about computer science and have the skills and experience necessary to succeed in their program, so including information about your hobbies or extracurricular activities may not be the best way to go forward.
An exception to this is if you’re including information about extenuating circumstances that have impacted your academic performance, in which case you should briefly explain how these circumstances have affected you and why you’re still a strong candidate for their program.
Tips on writing a top-notch computer science personal statement
Now that we’ve gone over what to include and what not to include in your computer science personal statement, let’s talk about how you can write a top-notch personal statement.
First, start by brainstorming a list of your computer science-related experiences, skills, and accomplishments . This will give you a good starting point for your personal statement and help you determine what information is most relevant to include.
By following these tips, you can write a computer science personal statement that is sure to impress the admissions committee and increase your chances of getting into your dream program.
Computer science personal statement examples
Now that we’ve covered the basics of what a computer science personal statement should include, let’s take a look at some computer science personal statement examples.
“I have been programming since I was 12 years old, and ever since then I have been fascinated by the possibilities that computer science offers. I am motivated by the idea of being able to create something from scratch and see it come to life, and I know that computer science will allow me to do just that. In addition, I have experience in working with code from different languages, which has taught me how to think critically and solve problems. My skills in critical thinking and problem solving are essential for studying computer science, as they will allow me to tackle complex challenges head-on.
Apart from my skills and experience, I am also passionate about learning new things. This is why during my free time I volunteered for Code for America, where I worked with a team of designers and developers to build a civic engagement platform. This experience showed me the importance of collaboration when it comes to creating something amazing, and it solidified my belief that teamwork is key to success.
Last year, I also had the opportunity to intern at Lyft, where I worked on a team that developed a new feature for the Lyft app. This experience was invaluable, as it gave me insights into the inner workings of one of the world’s most successful companies. It also showed me how computer science can be used to solve real-world problems.
Ultimately, I believe that I would be an excellent candidate for your computer science program because of my passion for the field combined with my skills and experience. I am confident that I have what it takes to succeed in computer science, and I hope to use my skills and knowledge to make a difference in the world.”
“I have always been interested in the way computers work and how they can be used to solve problems. This interest began when I was very young and has continued to grow as I have gotten older. My father is a computer scientist, so I have been exposed to computer science my entire life. In high school, I took several computer science courses and really enjoyed them. I also competed in several programming competitions and did well in them. In the following essay, I want to highlight my accomplishments as a computer science candidate and express my passion for this exciting field.
I am a computer science major at *NAME* University. I have taken several computer science courses and have gotten exceptional grades. My favorite course so far has been Introduction to Algorithms, for which I worked as a teaching assistant during my third year. I also competed in the Association for Computing Machinery International Collegiate Programming Contest, and our team placed in the top 100 out of 6,000 teams worldwide. This experience showed me that I have the ability to solve complex problems and work well under pressure.
As a student, I also worked as a part-time research assistant in the AI and Robotics laboratory, where I assisted in the development of a computer vision system for an autonomous robot. This experience allowed me to develop my skills in programming and computer science. In addition, I have also been a member of the Student Senate and have served on the Executive Board of the Student Government Association. These experiences have allowed me to develop leadership skills and learn how to work with others.
I am interested in computer science because it is a field that is constantly changing and evolving. There are always new problems to solve and new ways to solve them. I find this challenge exciting and invigorating. I am also interested in computer science because it is a field that combines creativity with logic. I enjoy using both my creative and logical sides when solving problems.
I am applying to your program specifically because I believe that it will allow me to further develop my skills in computer science. I am looking forward to taking classes from renowned professors and working with other talented students. I believe that your program will provide me with the skills and knowledge that I need to become a successful computer scientist.”
“Computers have always been a part of my life. As a toddler, I would watch my father work on computer programs for his business. Fascinated by the blinking cursor on the screen, I would ask him what he was doing and how it worked. My parents bought me my first computer when I was in grade school and I taught myself how to program in BASIC.
One of my biggest accomplishments in the field of computer science so far has been developing a computer program that can generate 3D models of human faces. This program has the potential to be used in a variety of applications, such as video game development, computer-aided design, and even law enforcement. I am currently working on submitting this program to a computer science conference for publication.
I have also been involved in a number of extracurricular activities related to computer science. I am a member of the Association for Computing Machinery and the Institute of Electrical and Electronics Engineers. I have also volunteered my time to teach computer science to elementary and middle school students through a local program called Girls Who Code.
Besides this, I have worked on several personal coding projects of my own. For example, I created a computer program that can solve Sudoku puzzles by using a technique called constraint satisfaction. I also developed a website for a local business called Joe’s pizzeria. My skills in computer science have also helped me in my other hobbies, such as photography and video editing. For the latter, I made a light correction tool that can automatically color-correct a video based on the primer of a still image.
I believe that my passion for computer science, as well as my experience in the field, makes me an ideal candidate for a graduate program in computer science. I am excited to continue learning and expanding my skills in computer science so that I can make an impact in this field. For this reason, I am excited to submit an early decision application to your computer science graduate program.”
What should I do after I have my first draft?
After you have completed the first draft of your computer science personal statement, you should follow these steps to edit, polish, and finalize your computer science personal statement:
2. Proofread and edit it : This step is crucial. A well-written and error-free computer science personal statement will make you look more professional and competent. Use spell check and grammar check , and then have someone else proofread it for you.
3. Ask for feedback : Once you’ve proofread and edited your computer science personal statement, ask a few people for their feedback. Choose people whose opinions you trust and who will be honest with you.
5. Modify personal statement for each program : Don’t just submit the same computer science personal statement to every program you apply to. Tailor it to each individual program, highlighting why you’re a good fit for that specific school.
6. Submit : Once you’re happy with your computer science personal statement, submit it along with the rest of your application.
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This is an example personal statement for a Masters degree application in Computer Science. See our guide for advice on writing your own postgraduate personal statement .
Having grown up in a world increasingly dependent on computers, I have witnessed the fast-paced innovative world that computer scientists work in. From a young age I have been following the advanced technical developments humanity has made in exciting fields such as AI and Robotics. I remember being in awe at what was possible with technology after seeing the footage in 2017 of Atlas, the robot made by Boston Dynamics, doing a backflip. The work conducted in Japan is equally, if not more, impressive, with the development of Pepper, the first robot designed to read emotions, in 2014. Watching what computer scientists make possible greatly inspires me and I believe a Masters in Computer Science at your university will help me enter a fascinating field.
I am on track to graduate from my undergraduate degree in Computer Science with a first. I have enjoyed studying the subject at this level and look forward to continuing to more advanced content.
Since school age I have been good at mathematical subjects. I believe that logical thinking comes naturally to me. During my teenage years I took an interest in self-assembling my own computer. This allowed me to explore the inner workings of computers and learn how each part fits together to work as a larger system. What I enjoy about computers is that behind the complex structures, it is just a lot of simple elements.
After working with the hardware side, I went on to explore software. I first became interested in the different operating systems available. I then went on to learn different coding languages, mainly Python, after starting a GCSE in Computing. I believe that coming from a multilingual family helped me learn coding languages. After finishing my GCSE course, I continued to develop my abilities in Python and began to read about other languages and their uses.
During the first year of my undergraduate I also had the fortunate opportunity to build a robot for the Robot Wars reboot with a team made up of my course mates. Not only was this a particularly valuable learning experience, but I greatly enjoyed the teamwork element of creation. Being able to bounce ideas off each other showed me just how exciting technological creation can be as you face a world of possibilities. Unfortunately, our robot did not win but we had a lot of fun and were able to learn from our mistakes.
Throughout my life my hobbies and qualifications have led up to a growing passion for computers. The world is becoming increasingly reliant on computers to help solve many of humanity’s problems. In addition, Computer Science also a fun medium to work with because of the many possibilities it presents. It is rare to find a field that is so vital to society and is extremely enjoyable and that is why I hope to work in a Computer Science field one day. I believe the education opportunities that this course can provide will help me get there.
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Writing the Perfect Computer Science Personal Statement
How to write a perfect computer science personal statement
Introduction.
Securing a place in a prestigious university computer science course can be highly competitive. If you are aiming for a Russell Group University or even an Oxbridge University, you need to know that they expect high standards. With numerous applicants vying for limited seats, it's crucial to present yourself as an exceptional candidate. One powerful tool at your disposal is the personal statement. This blog post will guide you through the process of crafting a winning personal statement, showcasing your passion for computer science, unique experiences, and future goals. By following these tried-and-tested techniques, you will be equipped to impress admissions committees, increase your chances of acceptance, and embark on an exciting academic journey.
1. Know Your Audience
Before diving into writing your personal statement, it's crucial to understand the expectations and values of the university admissions committee. Research the university's mission, vision, and curriculum to align your goals with theirs. Familiarize yourself with the specific requirements of the computer science program, highlighting key characteristics and skills they are seeking in applicants. This knowledge will enable you to tailor your personal statement to resonate with the selection panel and demonstrate your suitability for the course.
2. Reflect on Your Journey
To create a compelling personal statement, delve into your personal and academic experiences that have shaped your passion for computer science. Reflect on any challenges you have faced and how these have reinforced your determination. Highlight standout moments, such as participation in coding contests, internships, or research projects, that have nurtured your interest in the field. Articulate how these experiences have driven your decision to pursue a computer science course at the university.
3. Showcase Your Skills and Achievements
Highlighting your relevant skills and achievements is essential to demonstrate your competence and distinguish yourself from other applicants. Discuss your proficiency in programming languages, problem-solving abilities, and any noteworthy projects you have undertaken. Provide evidence of your skills using concrete examples, including software development projects, technical challenges overcome, or academic awards attained. By emphasizing your capabilities, you will exhibit your potential value to the computer science program.
4. Convey Your Passion
Universities seek individuals who are passionate about computer science and can contribute to the academic community. Communicate your enthusiasm by explaining how the subject captivates you, discussing influential readings or inspirational innovators. Illustrate how you have pursued your passion outside of formal education, such as attending conferences, participating in coding boot camps, or engaging in open-source projects. Conveying your fervor for the subject will demonstrate your dedication and drive for success.
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5. Define Your Future Goals
Admissions committees are interested in candidates with clear vision and ambition. Outline your long-term objectives in the field of computer science, showing how the university's program aligns with your goals. Discuss your aspirations to contribute to cutting-edge technology, address industry-specific challenges, or make a positive societal impact through your work. Demonstrating your future plans will assure the admissions panel of your determination and long-term commitment, increasing your chances of acceptance.
6. Be Authentic and Engaging
While ensuring your personal statement meets academic and professional standards, it should also serve as a reflection of your authentic self. Use a conversational tone and inject your unique personality into your writing. However, strike a balance by maintaining professionalism and avoiding overly informal language. Engage the reader with captivating anecdotes, personal experiences, or thought-provoking ideas. By standing out from the crowd and captivating the admissions committee, you increase the chances of leaving a lasting impression.
Crafting a perfect personal statement for a university computer science course is a meticulous yet rewarding process. By understanding the expectations of the admissions committee, reflecting on your journey, and showcasing your achievements and skills, you can effectively highlight your strengths. Coupled with a genuine passion for computer science and clear future goals that align with the program's objectives, you set yourself apart from other applicants. Remember to remain authentic, engaging, and proofread meticulously to ensure your statement shines. Your well-crafted personal statement will undoubtedly make a compelling case for your acceptance, propelling you towards a successful future in the field of computer science.
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Crafting a compelling personal statement is crucial for graduate school acceptance. Successful statements showcase your academic and professional accomplishments. They also put a spotlight on your personality, goals, and motivations. When you master this process can make your application stand out and secure your place in graduate school. That’s where our expertise comes into play. Our expertise is here to guide you through the graduate application complexities, providing insights, guidance, and feedback to enhance your writing and engage admissions committees.
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Use our free and unique Computer Science personal statement examples for inspiration to write your statement.
Computer Science courses are highly competitive in the UK.
A good personal statement for Computer Science can make a big difference and will help you stand out from other applicants.
Computer Science Personal Statement Example
My passion for computer science began at an early age when I was introduced to the world of technology by my father, who has been a Chief Technology Officer in the telecommunications industry for many years.
His work inspired me to start exploring computers and the endless possibilities that technology had to offer.
Throughout my school years, I have excelled in mathematics and science courses, which provided me with a solid foundation for computer science.
I took A-Levels in Mathematics, Further Mathematics, Computer Science, and Physics, which allowed me to delve deeper into the world of computer science and understand the concepts behind coding and programming.
I also have practical experience in the field of computer science. During my summer holidays, I worked as an intern at One Beyond, a web software agency.
During my time there, I had the opportunity to work with a team of experienced software developers and was exposed to a wide range of technologies such as the C programming language and Linux and Microsoft servers.
I was also able to gain hands-on experience in developing software and web applications, which reinforced my love for computer science.
My passion for computer science has also led me to explore the field further through various extracurricular activities.
I have attended computer science camps for young leaders in the ICT industry, which took me to various countries in Europe. These experiences allowed me to meet like-minded individuals and learn about new technologies and techniques from industry experts.
I was also able to apply the knowledge I gained to various projects, which further enhanced my skills and prepared me for a career in computer science.
I hold a certificate in Linux and HTML programming, which serves as evidence of my technical skills and dedication to the field.
I am confident that I have the passion, dedication, and skills necessary to succeed in a computer science program in the UK.
I believe that studying computer science at a university in the UK would provide me with the opportunity to further develop my skills and knowledge in the field.
I am motivated and driven to pursue a career in computer science, and I am confident that the program will provide me with the foundation I need to achieve my goals.
I am eager to apply my passion and dedication to the field, and I am confident that I will make a valuable contribution to the university community.
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As a student with a strong academic background in mathematics, chemistry, physics, and economics, I have always been fascinated by the world of computer science and its impact on the modern world.
My interest in the field began at the age of 14 when I started experimenting with free website programming and developed my first website at the age of 16.
This experience sparked my passion for web development and led me to pursue a deeper understanding of computer science.
During my time at school, I have had the opportunity to develop my skills and knowledge in a variety of programming languages such as C, Laravel, and PHP.
I have also gained experience working with Linux and Microsoft servers, as well as with popular content management systems such as WordPress.
This has provided me with a broad understanding of the different technologies used in web development and has allowed me to apply my skills to a range of projects.
In addition to my academic achievements, I have also had practical experience in the field through my internship at Web3, a web software agency.
During my time there, I worked with a team of experienced developers and was exposed to a wide range of technologies and development methodologies.
This experience allowed me to gain hands-on experience in developing web applications and has reinforced my love for computer science.
I am also constantly seeking to expand my knowledge and skills in the field through various extracurricular activities. I have attended numerous IT and web development conferences around the UK, where I have had the opportunity to learn about the latest technologies and trends in the industry.
These experiences have inspired me to continue exploring the field and have further fueled my passion for computer science.
My ultimate goal is to become a backend web developer, and I believe that a degree in computer science from a university in the UK would provide me with the foundation I need to achieve this goal.
I hold a certificate in CSS and HTML programming, which serves as evidence of my technical skills and dedication to the field.
In my free time, I enjoy playing tennis and cricket, which allows me to take a break from my studies and relax.
However, I always make sure to balance my leisure activities with my academic pursuits, as I am dedicated to achieving my goals and making a positive impact in the world of computer science.
I am confident that my passion, dedication, and skills make me an excellent candidate for a computer science program in the UK.
I am eager to apply my knowledge and experience to the program and to continue developing my skills and understanding of the field.
I am confident that I will make a valuable contribution to the university community and am excited about the opportunities and challenges that lie ahead.
Best Computer Science Personal Statement Example
From an early age, I was fascinated by technology and data analysis, and I knew that I wanted to pursue a career in this field.
During my time at Emmanuel Christian School Leicester, I captained the school’s football team and gained valuable leadership skills, teamwork and time management abilities. This experience helped me to develop a strong work ethic and a willingness to take on new challenges.
I have also had the opportunity to gain real-world experience through my summer jobs at Burger King, where I learned to prioritize tasks and work efficiently under pressure.
This has given me a strong understanding of the importance of attention to detail and has prepared me for the fast-paced and demanding environment of the computer science industry.
I have always excelled academically, particularly in mathematics, chemistry and physics, which I studied at A-Level.
I believe that my strong foundation in these subjects will enable me to succeed in computer science and tackle the complex algorithms and data structures that are central to the field.
My ultimate goal is to become a system administrator, where I can utilize my technical and problem-solving skills to ensure the smooth running of computer systems. I am confident that a degree in computer science will provide me with the necessary knowledge and experience to achieve this goal.
In my free time, I enjoy playing football and reading books. I find that these activities help me to relax and to maintain a healthy work-life balance.
I am also an avid learner, and I am always seeking out new information and techniques to improve my knowledge and skills.
I am eager to begin my studies at a UK university and to contribute to the computer science community. I believe that this program will provide me with the opportunities and resources that I need to achieve my goals and make a positive impact in the field.
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The following personal statement is written by an applicant who got accepted to the master’s program in computer science. Variations of this personal statement got accepted at the University of Utah, Stanford and Rensselaer Polytechnic Institute. Read this essay to understand what a top personal statement in CS should look like.
Sample Personal Statement in Computer Science
While SpaceX was launching satellites into space, my country was hoping for another loan from World Bank. I, for one, wondered when power outages would end in my home country. The delipidated condition of my country made me value the small things in life – from dreaming with my siblings about our future to just lying in the backyard gazing into the very depths of space, determined to make ourselves proud. Though my family comes from humble beginnings, my parents left no obstacle unturned to educate us. My father’s love for technology and education grew stronger with age and time. I still remember when he purchased a Pentium-1 for us, the first computer in my family and perhaps in my neighborhood. Almost every week, it needed repair because of our doings, but he kept encouraging us.
Inspired by my passion for technology, I applied to the topmost computer science undergrad program. My parents were overjoyed when I was accepted because I was the first in my family to attend college. One month into my undergrad, I founded “The CS Media Club,” a society with a vision to share success stories of software developers. It was the same time the following year when I handed over the elective office of the President to the freshmen students. For me, it was the start of a versatile voyage, an inherent determination to change lives, which fostered other ventures. Eventually, I volunteered as Brand Ambassador for International Youth Coding Challenge (IYCC). Under IYCC, I vowed to promote coding competitions among students. Again, I received an overwhelming response. Gradually this initiative expanded into astronomy and astrophysics, which still gives me goosebumps.
I faced many financial and academic challenges, and I had two options: either give up my education or don my diligence glasses to compete with the best. I chose the latter. Hence started my struggle as a freelance programmer. As a freelancer, I built lasting relationships with clients and enriched my communication skills. In addition, the soft skills I learned boosted my confidence to participate in MUN Conferences. I also leveraged my confidence and took two paid summer internships with Google and Apple. This provided real-life coding experience, amplified my interpersonal skills, and revamped my career path.
So, this journey from lying and looking into the depths of the space to now typing this essay in Microsoft’s office is full of adventures and emotions. All the years of hard work landed me a dream job with Microsoft, but like my late grandfather used to say, it is always lonely at the top. Thus, my inner self urges me to excel further and bring world-class coding and development knowledge to my home country.
We have a vast talent pool but not enough guidance and opportunities. My college professor often called our young minds the ambitious unguided missiles. I want to change this narrative and become a symbol of hope for many like me. I aim to join academia and research to guide the youth. I also want to establish a community of young developers and form research alliances with other organizations in exchange for ideas. This way, I hope to bring reality to some other kid aiming to build something wondrous for his home country under the fading light of our home.
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What to include in your computer science statement
- A strong opening: explain succinctly where your enthusiasm for computer science comes from, and why – but avoid the temptation to begin with a potted history describing when you got your first computer!
- How you're engaged with the subject: talk about what’s inspiring you or motivating you to study it, whether it’s a relevant book or news articles you’ve read, or maybe a bit of programming you've done.
- An understanding of what's involved: tutors love to read statements where your enthusiasm for the subject comes across, alongside a clear sense that you understand what computer science as a discipline is all about. Don't actually tell them what it is – they know that already. Show them that you know.
- Your personal goals: what are you hoping to achieve by studying this subject for the next three to four years?
- Show you're a team player: according to the engineering and computer science department at Durham University, 'try to write about how you work with others. Have you been part of a team or led a team? Have you had to organise something complex such as an event, a play or a football league?'
Computer science personal statement pitfalls
- Not standing out: Professor Lowe from the University of Oxford says that lots of the personal statements he sees 'are similar, bland, impersonal and don’t stand out – so make it personal, specific, and concrete'.
- Using clichés: avoid phrases such as 'computers are important in the modern world' or just saying 'I’m fascinated by artificial intelligence' without explaining why.
- Quoting Wikipedia: 'We already know what computer science is so we don’t need a Wikipedia definition. We’re interested in your understanding of it and your desire to learn', Robert Zimmer from Goldsmiths adds.
Engagement with the subject
Admissions tutors at University of Portsmouth and University of Warwick both agreed that clichés like ‘I want to do computing because it’s the future’ or opening lines like ‘I got my first computer when I was three’ are a big turn-off.
However, they do like to see evidence of your most recent engagement with the subject, or something current that’s inspired you. In fact, the kind of statement that would really hit the mark would include your reflections on some or all of the following:
- a programme you wrote or side project you've been working on
- an internship or some relevant work experience you did
- how your studies or wider reading have boosted your understanding or sparked your curiosity
- your opinions on a key topic such as data privacy
- any extracurricular interests that have given you relevant transferable skills
- an area or module you're particularly looking forward to studying. Something along those lines should engage the tutor reading your statement
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- Introduction
When it comes to applying for a computer science degree, your personal statement is a critical component of your university application. It’s more than just a summary of your academic achievements and extracurricular activities; it’s a window into your passion for the subject, your understanding of its complexities, and your readiness to embrace the academic challenges ahead.
This comprehensive guide offers essential advice, detailed examples, and practical tips to help you craft an impactful computer science personal statement.
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- Understanding the Essence of a Computer Science Personal Statement
The Role and Importance of Your Personal Statement in University Applications
The gateway to your future in computer science.
Your computer science personal statement is not just a formality; it’s a pivotal part of your university application. It’s where you can articulate your interest in computer science, your understanding of the field, and how your experiences have prepared you for this course of study.
This section of your application gives you the opportunity to stand out from other candidates by highlighting your unique insights, experiences, and aspirations.
Showcasing Your Personality and Passion
A personal statement goes beyond academic achievements. It’s a platform to show your genuine enthusiasm for computer science. You can discuss what aspects of the subject fascinate you, such as artificial intelligence, cyber security, or software development, and why. Share what drives your interest in these areas and how you have pursued this passion through projects, reading, or relevant experiences.
Demonstrating Your Suitability and Preparedness
Admissions tutors want to know why you are a good fit for their computer science program. This is your chance to showcase your technical skills, problem-solving abilities, and any relevant work or project experience.
Talk about specific instances where you’ve applied your computer science knowledge, whether it’s in coding a simple app, participating in hackathons, or taking additional courses related to computing.
Structuring Your Computer Science Personal Statement Effectively
Crafting a compelling introduction.
The opening of your personal statement should grab the reader’s attention. Start with a compelling anecdote, a fascinating fact about computer science, or a personal experience that sparked your interest in the field. This will set the tone for your statement and engage the admissions tutors right from the start.
Developing the Body with Relevant Content
In the body of your statement, delve into your academic achievements, extracurricular activities, and work experiences. Explain how these experiences have prepared you for a degree in computer science.
Be specific about the skills you’ve developed, such as programming languages you’re proficient in, mathematical competencies, and any notable projects or achievements.
Concluding with Your Future Aspirations
Conclude your statement by tying your past experiences and current interests to your future goals. Discuss how a degree in computer science will help you achieve your career aspirations. This not only shows your commitment to the field but also your potential to contribute meaningfully to it.
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- Key Components of a Strong Computer Science Personal Statement
Demonstrating Academic Preparedness and Intellectual Curiosity
Showcasing academic achievements and potential.
It’s essential to highlight your academic strengths, especially in subjects relevant to computer science like mathematics, physics, or computing.
Discuss any special projects, extended essays, or research you’ve undertaken that demonstrate your ability to handle complex concepts and your readiness for university-level study.
Illustrating Intellectual Curiosity
Express your intellectual curiosity about computer science. Discuss books, articles, podcasts, or lectures that have deepened your understanding and interest in the field. This shows that you are engaged with computer science beyond the classroom and are eager to explore its different aspects.
Reflecting on Relevant Experiences and Extracurricular Activities
Leveraging extracurricular activities.
Highlight how your extracurricular activities have contributed to your passion for computer science. Whether it’s a coding club, robotics team, or personal projects, these experiences can demonstrate your practical skills and commitment to learning more about the field.
Gaining Real-World Experience
If you have had internships, part-time jobs, or volunteer experiences related to computer science, discuss what you learned from these opportunities.
Describe any projects you worked on, challenges you faced, and how these experiences have shaped your understanding of what a career in computer science entails.
Personalizing Your Statement with Unique Insights and Experiences
Sharing personal stories and experiences.
Personal anecdotes can make your statement memorable. Share stories about how you became interested in computer science, challenges you’ve overcome in your journey, or moments of success and what they meant to you. This personal touch can make your statement stand out.
Connecting Your Past Experiences to Your Future Goals
Reflect on how your past experiences have shaped your current interests and future aspirations in computer science. This shows a coherent narrative and a clear understanding of how a computer science degree fits into your long-term goals.
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- Crafting Your Narrative: Tips and Techniques
Writing Tips for a Compelling Personal Statement
Creating a compelling personal statement for your computer science application can be a pivotal factor in your admission process. Here are some key points to consider when crafting your statement:
- Start with a Strong Opening : Capture the reader’s attention from the beginning. Use an engaging anecdote, a thought-provoking question, or an interesting fact about computer science to start your statement.
- Be Authentic : Write in your own voice. Your personal statement should reflect your personality and enthusiasm for the subject. Avoid trying to sound overly formal if it doesn’t come naturally.
- Show, Don’t Just Tell : Demonstrate your passion and skills through specific examples. Instead of simply stating that you love computer science, describe projects, experiences, or challenges that showcase your interests and abilities.
- Make It Personal and Unique : Share personal experiences or stories that influenced your decision to pursue computer science. This can include anything from an inspiring teacher to a particular problem you solved or software you developed.
- Structure Your Content Wisely : Organize your statement in a clear and logical manner. Start with your interest in computer science, follow with your experiences and achievements, and conclude with your future aspirations.
- Highlight Relevant Skills and Achievements : Discuss your academic achievements, extracurricular activities, and any work experience relevant to computer science. Be specific about the skills you’ve developed, such as programming languages, mathematical aptitude, or analytical thinking.
- Reflect on Your Learning Journey : Talk about what you have learned from your experiences and how they have prepared you for a degree in computer science. Reflect on both successes and challenges and what they taught you.
- Connect Past Experiences with Future Goals : Illustrate how your previous experiences have shaped your current interests and how they align with your future career aspirations in computer science.
- Keep It Concise and Focused : Avoid unnecessary details and keep your statement to the point. Each paragraph should contribute to building a comprehensive picture of your passion and suitability for a computer science degree.
- Proofread and Revise : Ensure your statement is free from grammatical errors and typos. Read your statement multiple times, and have it reviewed by teachers, mentors, or peers for feedback.
- Avoid Clichés and Overused Phrases : Steer clear of generic statements and clichés that don’t add value to your narrative. Strive for originality in both content and expression.
- Balance Confidence with Humility : While it’s important to showcase your accomplishments and skills, maintain a tone of humility. Acknowledge that there is always more to learn and grow.
- Respect the Word Limit : Adhere to any specified word limits or guidelines provided by the university. This shows that you can follow directions and express yourself concisely.
- End with a Strong Conclusion : Conclude your statement by reinforcing your passion for computer science and your eagerness to further explore this field at the university level.
Remember, your personal statement is a critical component of your application. It’s your opportunity to make a memorable impression and demonstrate why you are an ideal candidate for a computer science program.
Avoiding Common Pitfalls in Personal Statements
When crafting a personal statement, especially for a competitive field like computer science, it’s just as important to know what to avoid as it is to know what to include. Here are some key points to help you steer clear of common pitfalls:
- Steer Clear of Clichés : Avoid overused phrases and generic statements that don’t add a unique perspective to your application. Phrases like “I have always been passionate about computers” are too vague and don’t tell the admissions committee anything specific about you.
- Avoid Repetition : Don’t repeat information that can be found elsewhere in your application, like grades or test scores. Use the personal statement to provide new insights into your character, experiences, and aspirations.
- Resist Exaggeration or Untruths : Be honest and authentic. Overstating your accomplishments or skills can backfire if you’re unable to back them up. Stay true to your actual experiences and achievements.
- Don’t Neglect the Basics : Spelling, grammar, and punctuation mistakes can detract from your statement’s impact. Proofread thoroughly and consider having someone else review your statement for errors.
- Avoid a Negative Tone : Keep the tone positive and forward-looking. Even when discussing challenges or failures, focus on what you learned or how you’ve grown from those experiences.
- Don’t Make It a Resume : Your personal statement shouldn’t be a list of accomplishments and activities. Instead, it should tell a story about who you are and why you’re passionate about computer science.
- Beware of Being Too Vague or Broad : Be specific in your examples and explanations. General statements don’t convey a deep understanding or genuine interest in the field.
- Avoid Controversial Topics : Steer clear of polarizing or controversial subjects unless they are directly relevant to your interest in computer science and you can discuss them in a thoughtful and respectful manner.
- Don’t Rely on Quotes or Clichéd Inspirations : Opening with a quote or a very common source of inspiration can come across as unoriginal. It’s better to use your own words to express your motivations and aspirations.
- Avoid Underestimating the Importance of Structure : A disorganized personal statement can be difficult to follow. Ensure your statement has a clear introduction, body, and conclusion.
- Don’t Ignore the Prompt : If the university provides a specific prompt or question for the personal statement, make sure you address it directly. Ignoring the prompt can give the impression that you’re not attentive to details.
- Resist the One-Size-Fits-All Approach : Customize your statement for each application. A generic statement that doesn’t address specific aspects of the program or university may come across as insincere.
- Avoid Technical Jargon Overload : While it’s important to demonstrate your knowledge, overly technical language can make your statement less accessible. Remember, your audience may not have the same level of expertise in computer science.
- Don’t Forget to Show Your Human Side : While technical skills and academic achievements are important, also show aspects of your personality and life outside of academics. This can include hobbies, volunteering, or other interests that have shaped you as a person.
By avoiding these common pitfalls, your personal statement will have a better chance of resonating with the admissions committee, showcasing not only your qualifications for a computer science program but also your unique character and perspective.
A well-written computer science personal statement can significantly enhance your university application. It allows you to showcase not just your academic abilities and technical skills, but also your passion for the subject and your vision for the future.
Use the tips and advice provided in this guide to create a compelling and authentic personal statement that resonates with admissions tutors and paves the way for your academic journey in computer science.
Q1: How much emphasis should I place on discussing programming languages and technical skills?
While technical skills are important, balance them with your passion for the subject, problem-solving abilities, and how these skills have contributed to your interest in computer science.
Q2: Can I include my hobbies and interests outside of computer science in my statement?
Yes, especially if they demonstrate skills relevant to computer science, such as analytical thinking, creativity, or teamwork.
Q3: How can I make my personal statement stand out among many applicants?
Focus on being authentic, share unique personal experiences or insights, and clearly articulate your passion and understanding of computer science.
Q4: Is it okay to mention a specific university program or professor in my statement?
If you’re writing a statement for a specific university, it can be beneficial to mention specific aspects of their program that attract you. However, if you’re using the same statement for multiple applications, keep it general.
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Computer science personal statement example 1.
From an early age I’ve always been deeply interested in computing. It was my dad, introducing me to the computer systems at his work place that first sparked this interest. I can always remember the feeling of wanting to know just how computers worked, why they worked and what else they could do.
This interest never left me, only growing more profound and passionate with every new discovery I made. From communicating with an artificial intelligence to seeing the wonders of the Internet for the first time, computers have left me fascinated with just how much power yet mystery they hold.
The A-Levels I chose to study have all helped me to develop both myself and my understanding of the subject. Physics for example has helped me to understand how certain parts of a computer function, while Computing has given me a greater insight into the business aspects of the computer industry.
Chemistry and Physics have both helped to improve my analytical and evaluative skills. Within maths I have been lucky enough to have a teacher who was very interested in computer science. He has been especially helpful, lending me books such as Gödel, Escher, Bach: an Eternal Golden Braid. This has given me an insight into the richness that is computer science.
My interest in computing has not been restricted to the classroom and college life. Within the last twelve months I’ve used the knowledge that I’ve gained over the past twelve years together with the help of my family to set up my own computer related business. This has given me a totally new perspective on how certain things function, and how business operates.
The writing of a business plan was a totally alien experience for me, but over the course of 9 months I researched and planned, and finally when the plan was complete I was rewarded with the satisfaction of knowing that I had completed something that most people would never have the chance to do especially at my age.
Through the setting up of the company and its subsequent running I have learnt many things. These include how to balance tasks effectively, how critical teamwork can be and how to delegate tasks to get the job done quickly and efficiently.
As well as spending time both studying and helping to run the business I understand the importance of having time to relax. One of my hobbies that I try to make time for is learning to fly, and gaining my private pilots license.
As a child I dreamed of becoming a pilot and luckily its one dream that I’ve managed to follow. I love the freedom that flying gives you and the control that you have when in the air. Training for my private pilots license (PPL) has also involved me taking onboard a lot of responsibility for the safety of those onboard, and those around the aircraft.
From ensuring that I carry out the pre-flight checks correctly, and knowing what’s around you both while you’re on the ground and in the air to ensuring that I’m prepared for any eventuality.
I also enjoy both playing and watching tennis. I’ve played in various competitions before, and have helped to umpire junior matches at my club. To ensure that I can fit everything in I’ve had to develop very good time management, prioritising what I need to do efficiently.
I’m looking forward with great anticipation to the challenges that studying for a degree in computer science will bring.
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A good profile but have you.
Fri, 04/06/2004 - 00:00
a good profile but have you READ the books you mention and also elaborate more on Maths - it's very crucial to your Computer Science degree. Why Comp Sci not SW Engineering or Comp Games, what do you hope to learn?
ignore the h8r comment above
Mon, 06/09/2004 - 00:00
I just graduted from a Comp Si degree and your PS covers waay more than I did. Ignore the comment above adding more academi will make your PS seem too rehearsed. It is lear you have a passion for computing that is all the admissions officers are looking for. Good luck!
This is one of the best
Thu, 20/01/2005 - 00:00
This is one of the best computer science personal statements that I have ever set my eyes on. You clearly have a deep interest in the subject. You'll secure places easily! All the best for University.
if n really wrote this ps by
Wed, 02/11/2005 - 00:00
if n really wrote this ps by urself then it is really good. nice one
I enjoyed reading this. Very
Mon, 07/11/2005 - 00:00
I enjoyed reading this. Very straight to the point and is what everyone does too.
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Needs Work..
Wed, 26/04/2006 - 00:00
Sentences are too attenuated...Grammatical reconstruction is required...In other words, some sentences are too long and muddled. They can confuse the reader. Just my 2 cents...BLE$$.
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Fri, 16/06/2006 - 00:00
Thank You for this brilliant personal statement. It has played a huge part my planning.
Thank you very much this has
Mon, 16/10/2006 - 22:18
Thank you very much this has helped me out greatly. I was killing myself on how to write mine
Looks great but...
Tue, 16/01/2007 - 18:25
Well I have read some of your statement. I am considering Uni, but not sure what cource to take....... I ahve no idea what computer science is but, i dont think i'll do well at it becasue i do not no what it is. HOw long did it take you, did you use a dictionary? Does it really have to be that loooooooonnnnnnnnnnnngggggggggg?????
overall this is good,
Fri, 02/03/2007 - 23:43
overall this is good, although the first paragraph leaves a lot to be desired. the first line is grammatically incorrect, and the following two are clumsy. i can see why cambridge wouldn't have liked this.
first impressions are key with a personal statement, it is very like an interview in this respect.
Wed, 14/03/2007 - 19:25
The lack of details raises red flags for me; I've no idea what business this student initiated, don't know his father's job, or the name of the very helpful teacher.
wel..this is how it goes.
Tue, 08/05/2007 - 15:05
wel..this is how it goes..pretty average..nahin to special...cud rite better in my sleep son..get ur act together and show me that u have general interest inthis subject and that u didnt copy this from a book or a sheet which ur careers advisor probably gave u!
this statement is 2 reheresed
Wed, 09/05/2007 - 14:13
this statement is 2 reheresed and sounds like the write isjus trying to make things up which would impress the reader surely a more honest statement would go down better?!?
wadup man dis is a gd
Mon, 02/07/2007 - 08:38
wadup man dis is a gd personal statment i was looking for a gd 1 to help me with me with my one and dw iam not gonna copy it but i got a gd lk at how a gd ps should be
Thu, 16/08/2007 - 20:37
This is horrible. Do you people read admissions websites. This will get rejected. They don't care about your past when you were a little boy. They want to hear about your college years. Every sentence should mean something, and this was just a bunch of bologna.
this was quite a good
Fri, 14/09/2007 - 10:17
this was quite a good personal statement i found it very useful
Thu, 20/09/2007 - 09:22
I do not understand why everyone is going off it with this PS. It is obvisouly good or else all of the universities would not have made an offer would they??
Great personal statement.
Mon, 22/10/2007 - 10:21
Great personal statement. thank yuour for giving me an idea on how to do mines.!!!
Very interesting
Wed, 31/10/2007 - 09:45
very nice!! i really enjoy reading your personal statment and it helped me alot to write my personal statment. GOOD KEEP IT UP!!! ALL BEST WISHES FOR U 4RM SIMRAN
Fri, 02/11/2007 - 07:19
its was such a nice statement...thank you...it has been of great help to me
Tue, 06/11/2007 - 18:23
Very nicely done. Just wanted to say thanks because you've just helped me write mine as I didn't know where to start.
sounds too forced and tries
Thu, 29/11/2007 - 21:26
sounds too forced and tries hard to be the stereotypical computing essay. lacks depth. a person who wasn't doing computing a levels or knows nothing about it could have written the same kind of essay.
I am so much overwhelmed by
Sat, 08/12/2007 - 19:55
I am so much overwhelmed by your interesting and inspiring Personal Statement on computer science. I love it.
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Sat, 08/12/2007 - 20:02
I could not afford to stop reading your all inspiring and motivating Personal Statement on Computer Science. You've really giving me a wonderful beginning I never thought of.Great Job.
this really heleped me!thanks
Tue, 01/04/2008 - 15:58
this really heleped me!thanks a lot :) really good statement
Sun, 06/07/2008 - 03:16
Humm not bad not bad
Spectacular
Sat, 23/08/2008 - 19:26
Never in all my years have I been so amazed. This personal statement is truely a work of art. Absolutely super.
Wow, every uni you've put
Sun, 21/09/2008 - 20:52
Wow, every uni you've put here (excluding cambridge) is what im applying for. How have you found york and its courses?
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Mon, 17/11/2008 - 10:17
Thankyou for this, it has guided me through the structure well, good luck
Good PS there man!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Mon, 17/11/2008 - 12:42
I have spent a few minutes looking for samples of personal statements but this beats all I have seen and it is really helping me in writing mine .
Wed, 19/11/2008 - 23:38
i wish this was my work ,the PS is the best so far,its worth more than an admission.keep it up
you obvioulsy love yourself
Fri, 02/01/2009 - 20:03
wow i'm so impressed dis is
Wed, 27/05/2009 - 01:08
wow i'm so impressed dis is good
Fri, 09/10/2009 - 15:04
I've just read your PS and surprised how you could mixed all these things and organized them perfectly to showing us a great story to enjoy
thanks alot and good luck
It does sound impressive. Yet
Tue, 10/11/2009 - 11:55
It does sound impressive. Yet at the same time it lacks computer science, which involves a lot of maths. It sounds like you're applying for a course involving computer engineering
Excellent statement, thanks
Thu, 07/01/2010 - 15:42
Excellent statement, thanks for the inspiration. I have long had difficulty in decided how to start my PS.
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Sat, 08/01/2011 - 02:26
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You are obviously interested in the subject area, but you could have done it much more concisely.
With 100's of application to read, admissions aren't looking for your life's history. A short and to the point statement will work as well if not better.
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I'm attempting to write my personal statement as to why I want to study computer science. Not sure how this sounds.
"I want to study Computer Science because I believe having the ability to program and design your own websites/applications, as well as understanding Algorithm and amongst other things, are one of the most increasingly useful, exciting and rewarding skills you can have. It is becoming evident that people of any demographic, which I might add poorer third world countries, use the internet in their everyday lives. Computer Science is important and essential for the future. I want to be part of that. I believe I have the drive and enthusiasm to succeed in this field. I also believe I will put in all the hard work, and hours needed to earn my degree. Not only would it fill me with pride that I managed to achieve, I would also have an excellent, well paid job out of it."
Sorry if it seems like I'm being lazy and letting you do my work. That is not my intention. I just have no clue if the above sounds good or not. Perhaps maybe could I have some critiques?
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My fascination with technology was sparked when, as a child I thought it would be a great idea to take apart my Playstation console. Aware of the danger, I was still eager to see how it all worked inside. I find it intriguing how fast society has been shaped and continues to be, by the influence of Computer Science. A few years ago if someone were to have claimed that cars would become autonomous, people would have doubted them. Now we are at a stage where nearly anything is possible and this is due to the relentless problem solving of computer scientists. The latest software update released by Tesla motors allows their cars to learn how to drive themselves, and is an example of artificial intelligence, a sector which I am most interested in. I want to study Computer Science because I want to gain the knowledge needed to be able to help find solutions to world problems, with the efficient use of computer technology. With the knowledge and skills, I will attain from this course, the creative ideas that I could bring into fruition would be endless. I hope to become one of the computer scientists who adapt technology to help the human race evolve. One possibility would be for artificially intelligent gadgets to recognise different people and adjust to their individual needs based on personal preferences. I have been teaching myself Objective-C syntax in my spare time and have completed online programming courses, which have allowed me to explore the endless possibilities that computer science can bring to the world. I have also learnt to create a simple iOS game using Apple’s syntax called ‘Swift’, in XCode alongside Photoshop.
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In this post, we're excited to open our collection of personal statement examples for graduate school. We're sharing two that students just like you used to get into graduate Computer Science programs: Essay #1: First this Master's application essay for California State University delves into the transformative power of technology in the ...
Personal Statement Example For Computer Science Course. As a student with a strong academic background in mathematics, chemistry, physics, and economics, I have always been fascinated by the world of computer science and its impact on the modern world. My interest in the field began at the age of 14 when I started experimenting with free ...
The following personal statement is written by an applicant who got accepted to the master's program in computer science. Variations of this personal statement got accepted at the University of Utah, Stanford and Rensselaer Polytechnic Institute. Read this essay to understand what a top personal statement in CS should look like.
What to include in your computer science statement. A strong opening: explain succinctly where your enthusiasm for computer science comes from, and why - but avoid the temptation to begin with a potted history describing when you got your first computer! How you're engaged with the subject: talk about what's inspiring you or motivating you ...
Structuring Your Computer Science Personal Statement Effectively Crafting a Compelling Introduction. The opening of your personal statement should grab the reader's attention. Start with a compelling anecdote, a fascinating fact about computer science, or a personal experience that sparked your interest in the field.
University of Surrey. This personal statement is unrated. In this world that computer is conquering every aspect of life one by one, being a consumer doesn't satisfy me and I want to take part in this revolution. I'm aware that computer science needs someone who can think logically, communicate perfectly and also have a problem-solver mind.
PERSONAL STATEMENT EXAMPLES Computer science personal statements . Discover personal statement examples written by students accepted onto computer science and related courses. Read through the examples to help shape your own personal statement.
Computer Science Personal Statement Example 1. From an early age I've always been deeply interested in computing. It was my dad, introducing me to the computer systems at his work place that first sparked this interest. I can always remember the feeling of wanting to know just how computers worked, why they worked and what else they could do.
Mine simply followed in the following structure: Intro, Interest in the field of computer science, My achievements (projects, exp, etc.), Why King's? (note: you can tailor to a specific university if you wish. For some reason, I did that to ensure I tell them exactly why them as opposed to another uni).
I'm attempting to write my personal statement as to why I want to study computer science. Not sure how this sounds. "I want to study Computer Science because I believe having the ability to program and design your own websites/applications, as well as understanding Algorithm and amongst other things, are one of the most increasingly useful ...
Computer Science Personal Statement. My fascination with technology was sparked when, as a child I thought it would be a great idea to take apart my Playstation console. Aware of the danger, I was still eager to see how it all worked inside. I find it intriguing how fast society has been shaped and continues to be, by the influence of Computer ...
And the actions all traced back to a batch of bad computer code. A flawed software update sent out by a little-known cybersecurity company caused chaos and disruption around the world on Friday.