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How to Start a Cover Letter: 7 Great Cover Letter Openings (+Examples)

Kaja Jurčišinová — Staff Writer

Beginnings are always hard. The same goes for writing a cover letter. You know exactly what you want to say, but you’re not sure how to start a cover letter.

Generally speaking,  the cover letter intro is a place where you should:

  • introduce yourself in detail
  • explain why the job is exciting for you
  • show you’re a great fit for the position

Of course, there’s no single right way to do it. That means that you’ve got multiple options and can get a little creative.

Whether you’re looking for a traditional cover letter introduction, or something more unconventional, you’ll find it in this article — together with a quick guide and cover letter openings examples.

Alternatively, you can also just watch this quick video guide on how to write a cover letter below.

Successful cover letter introductions (examples)

We’ve gathered some really good opening lines from successful cover letters that got people hired in well-known companies such as HubSpot, Siemens, or Lush:

HubSpot Director of Business Development Cover Letter Sample

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Account Executive Cover Letter Intro Sample

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Sales Associate at LUSH Cover Letter Intro Example

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Siemens SCADA Engineer Cover Letter Intro Template

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Warner Bros. Public Relations Intern Cover Letter Example

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Do you want to know how to craft such a strong cover letter opening yourself? Follow a quick guide below.

And if you prefer to see more examples from hired professionals or find a job-specific cover letter example for your industry, visit our  cover letter library .

Intro paragraph: a quick guide on how to start a cover letter

When it comes to cover letter openings, rule number one is that you should always start your cover letter in a way that grabs a recruiter’s attention from the get go.

On the other hand, be careful and stay professional. Don’t overdo it.

So the question is — when should you pick a standard opening paragraph and when to go with something more creative?

Well, it all depends on a particular job and the company culture .

Take time to research each company where you’re applying for a job and identify its tone of voice.

Are they formal or casual? Look at the job description, their website, and social media accounts and you’ll be able to get the right idea.

Then in your cover letter opening, follow at least one of these 7 main principles :

what to include in your cover letter opening

1. Be direct

Employers are busy people who usually don’t have time to read long texts or overused  cover letter phrases . What they want to know is simply whether you’re a good fit. Why not make it easier for them and be specific from the very beginning?

Let them know what position you’re applying for and use your cover letter opening to highlight years of experience in your field and any relevant  hard or soft skills   you bring to the table.

It’s a universal, yet effective answer to how to start a cover letter.

Cover Letter Intro Example #1

I am very interested in the Sales Specialist opportunity at [Company XYZ] that was advertised on LinkedIn. I am a hard-working and dedicated individual with over two years of extensive industry experience, a Business & Management degree from McGill University, and a strong determination to meet and exceed all business goals and objectives.

2. Respond to the company’s needs

Employers want to know how you can contribute to their company. The first paragraph of the cover letter is a great place to demonstrate that.

Have a look at the job offer, go over the company’s needs, and pick those that you can easily relate to.

Then take a look at your achievements and impressive skills, and use them to illustrate how you can bring value to the new job. Ideally by mentioning any quantifiable results from your previous jobs.

Cover Letter Intro Example #2

Over the course of last year, I more than doubled [Company XYZ]’s Twitter followers and ran two successful Instagram ad campaigns that generated $35K+ in revenue. I’d love to bring my expertise in organically expanding the social reach and delivering ROI to the social media manager position at [Company XYZ].

3. Include company facts and news

Companies want to see that you’re interested in them and their industry. If you show that you already know about them and have done your research, you can make a great first impression.

Browse their website and scour the internet for related news articles. They can provide you with interesting facts that pertain to your role.

It can be anything — a specific event, fact, notable statistic, or an award that the company has recently received.

Cover Letter Intro Example #3

When I saw that [Company XYZ] was featured in Fortune Magazine last month for its commitment to renewable energy and reducing waste in the workplace, I was truly inspired. With my track record of reducing costs by over 30% and promoting sustainable technologies, I’m excited about the opportunity to take on the account executive role to expand your company’s growth and work towards a greener future.

4. Highlight a mutual connection

Referrals can work like magic when it comes to getting invited to a  job interview . So if someone has recommended you for a position or you know anyone at the company who can vouch for you, mention their name right away.

After reading your cover letter, recruiters will most likely want to learn why your referrer thought you’d be a good fit. If nothing else, it will make recruiters pay attention to the rest of your cover letter.

Cover Letter Intro Example #4

I was excited to learn of this job opportunity from my former colleague, Lucy May. We’ve worked closely together for several years, most recently on a complex data analysis project at [Company XYZ]. She advised me to apply as she thought I’d be a good match for this position on your team.

5. Show passion for what you do

Employers love job candidates who are enthusiastic about what they do. These candidates tend to perform better and are more dedicated to their roles.

So if you’re all hyped up about your job, don’t hesitate to infuse your cover letter with a couple of sentences demonstrating your excitement about what you’re doing.

Cover Letter Intro Example #5

I knew I had a knack for writing ever since I was the main editor of our high school magazine. Thanks to my 15+ years of experience, I’ve transformed my passion into a fashion blog with 30K+ monthly readers, featured articles on Time and Cosmopolitan that have garnered over 50K views, and a writer’s workshop I founded for young up-and-coming writers.

6. Open with a relevant accomplishment

Hiring managers like achievers. If you’ve accomplished something noteworthy while with your previous employer, there’s a good chance you can bring the same value to your next job too.

What’s more, it shows that you’re an expert in your field.

If you have any special skills or accomplishments that will make you stand out from other job candidates, mention them right away in your cover letter opening.

However, try to make no general claims without providing evidence. Support your arguments with real numbers and statistics.

Cover Letter Intro Example #6

Over the past year as digital marketing manager at [Company XYZ], I’ve generated $50k+ in revenue, increased organic traffic to our blog by 18%, and almost tripled our social media ROI.

7. Use humor and creativity

Recruiters are human beings, too (shocking). In a pile of boring resumes and repetitive  cover letters and motivation letters , they may find a good joke, juicy pun, or funny opening line a nice refreshing break.

It can even be a reason to call you up for an interview.

So if the company seems to have an easygoing vibe, use humor to bring attention to your skills or relevant personal traits that are needed for the position you’re targeting.

Cover Letter Intro Example #7

Before I flood you with all the reasons why I’m going to be your next writer, I would like to tell you a little about myself. I didn’t learn to hold a pencil until I was about six years old, which made everyone think I’d never pen a single letter. And now here I am, bidding to become your next Shakespeare.

Cover letter beginning: What other things to include?

Now that you saw some great examples of cover letter openings, you may wonder what else can you do to perfect your cover letter introduction.

Well, there are a few other key elements that a good cover letter beginning should include :

  • contact information both for you and the company
  • headline (optional)
  • personalized greeting

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This is the place for your and your company’s contact information.

Make sure that right at the top of the page you list your contact details such as:

  • phone number

Optionally, you can also include:

  • your professional title
  • date of birth
  • current date
  • personal website/LinkedIn

Additionally, never forget to add company-related information . You should always include the manager’s recruiter’s name (if it was made available to you), job title department, the name of the company, and their address.

Left align all of this information. Or make it easy for yourself and choose a pre-designed  cover letter template   and only fill in the details.

Headline (optional)

You don’t have to include it, but it can help you grab the hiring manager’s attention.

In your cover letter headline, you can use numbers, questions, or interesting adjectives .

It can be something like “5 Ways I Can Help You Improve Your Company’s Marketing.”

Alternatively, you can just state the name of the position you’re applying for.

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Salutation (or how to address a cover letter)

Try to avoid using “To Whom it May Concern” or “Dear Sir/Madam” . This form of address, while correct, has become so overused it won’t help you stand out at all.

Instead, try to research the hiring manager’s name online . Look at the job posting, and check the company’s website or  LinkedIn . (Did you know that you can turn your LinkedIn profile into a great resume  with just one click?)

Alternatively, you can address it to the whole team or HR.

Generally, stick to these rules:

  • How to address a cover letter to a recruiter or hiring manager:  The best practice is to use a personalized greeting in the following form: “Dear [first name]” or “Dear Mr./Mrs. [last name]” for formal companies.
  • How to address a cover letter to multiple recipients: If you’re addressing your cover letter to the entire team or human resources, you can use “Dear [name of the company/department] Team” or “Dear Human Resources” .
  • How to address a cover letter to an unknown person: If you fail to find the hiring manager’s name and don’t want to address your cover letter to an entire team or HR, use “Dear Hiring Manager” , or “Dear Recruitment Officer” .

After the salutations, you can continue with an attention-grabbing intro paragraph.

HR expert tip: Christy’s word of advice

“In general, a traditional formal cover letter is the safest bet. But there are times when you can totally throw that advice out the window and have a bit of fun putting your personality on paper! Take a look at how the company brands its ‘voice’ on its website and in the job description. Do they sound relaxed and personality-driven? Is formality anathema to them? If yes, don’t be afraid to reciprocate (while still keeping it professional). After all, you’re not just applying for a job: you’re applying to be part of the company’s culture”. —  Christy Morgan, Resident HR Expert

Key takeaways: How to begin a cover letter

To sum up — the beginning of your cover letter will determine whether the hiring managers will read the rest of it or not.

If you want them to pay attention to what you have to say, make sure your cover letter opening:

  • Uses a personalized greeting
  • Says who you are
  • Shows you’re passionate about the job or the company
  • Highlights your top (and relevant) accomplishments and skills
  • Mentions a mutual contact
  • Reflects the company’s tone of voice
  • Is tailored to a specific position and company’s needs
  • Uses keywords from the job description
  • Is short, nice, and direct

Of course, the rest of your cover letter is important too.

If you’d like to know what to write in the rest of your letter, check out our complete  cover letter guide , get inspired by  cover letter examples , or learn how to  end a cover letter .

This article was recently updated. The original article was written by Nikoleta Žišková in 2021.

Kaja Jurčišinová — Staff Writer

Kaja Jurčišinová

Kaja Jurcisinova is a fresh graduate and a junior copywriter at Kickresume. Kaja completed her undergraduate degree in Art History at the University of St Andrews in 2018 and graduated with a Master’s in Arts and Culture from the University of Groningen in 2021. She was an intern at multiple cultural institutions across Europe, including the Dutch Museum Association in Amsterdam, the Matter of Art Biennale in Prague, and the European Cultural Centre in Venice. At the moment, she resides in Visby on the Swedish island of Gotland.

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How to write a great cover letter in 2024: tips and structure

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A cover letter is a personalized letter that introduces you to a potential employer, highlights your qualifications, and explains why you're a strong fit for a specific job.

Hate or love them, these brief documents allow job seekers to make an impression and stand out from the pile of other applications. Penning a thoughtful cover letter shows the hiring team you care about earning the position.

Here’s everything you need to know about how to write a cover letter — and a great one, at that.

What is a cover letter and why does it matter?

A professional cover letter is a one-page document you submit alongside your CV or resume as part of a job application. Typically, they’re about half a page or around 150–300 words.

An effective cover letter doesn’t just rehash your CV; it’s your chance to highlight your proudest moments, explain why you want the job, and state plainly what you bring to the table.

Show the reviewer you’re likable, talented, and will add to the company’s culture . You can refer to previous jobs and other information from your CV, but only if it helps tell a story about you and your career choices .

What 3 things should you include in a cover letter?

A well-crafted cover letter can help you stand out to potential employers. To make your cover letter shine, here are three key elements to include:

1. Personalization

Address the hiring manager or recruiter by name whenever possible. If the job posting doesn't include a name, research to find out who will be reviewing applications. Personalizing your cover letter shows that you've taken the time to tailor your application to the specific company and role.

2. Highlight relevant achievements and skills

Emphasize your most relevant skills , experiences, and accomplishments that directly relate to the job you're applying for. Provide specific examples of how your skills have benefited previous employers and how they can contribute to the prospective employer's success. Use quantifiable achievements , such as improved efficiency, cost savings, or project success, to demonstrate your impact.

3. Show enthusiasm and fit

Express your enthusiasm for the company and the position you're applying for. Explain why you are interested in this role and believe you are a good fit for the organization. Mention how your values, goals, and skills align with the company's mission and culture. Demonstrating that you've done your research can make a significant impression.

What do hiring managers look for in a cover letter?

Employers look for several key elements in a cover letter. These include:

Employers want to see that your cover letter is specifically tailored to the position you are applying for. It should demonstrate how your skills, experiences, and qualifications align with the job requirements.

Clear and concise writing

A well-written cover letter is concise, easy to read, and error-free. Employers appreciate clear and effective communication skills , so make sure your cover letter showcases your ability to express yourself effectively.

Demonstrated knowledge of the company

Employers want to see that you are genuinely interested in their organization. Mention specific details about the company, such as recent achievements or projects, to show that you are enthusiastic about joining their team.

Achievements and accomplishments

Highlight your relevant achievements and accomplishments that demonstrate your qualifications for the position. Use specific examples to showcase your skills and show how they can benefit the employer.

Enthusiasm and motivation

Employers want to hire candidates who are excited about the opportunity and motivated to contribute to the company's success. Express your enthusiasm and passion for the role and explain why you are interested in working for the company.

Professionalism

A cover letter should be professional in tone and presentation. Use formal language, address the hiring manager appropriately, and follow standard business letter formatting.

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How do you structure a cover letter?

A well-structured cover letter follows a specific format that makes it easy for the reader to understand your qualifications and enthusiasm for the position. Here's a typical structure for a cover letter:

Contact information

Include your name, address, phone number, and email address at the top of the letter. Place your contact information at the beginning so that it's easy for the employer to reach you.

Employer's contact information

Opening paragraph, middle paragraph(s), closing paragraph, complimentary close, additional contact information.

Repeat your contact information (name, phone number, and email) at the end of the letter, just in case the employer needs it for quick reference.

Remember to keep your cover letter concise and focused. It should typically be no more than one page in length. Proofread your letter carefully to ensure it is free from spelling and grammatical errors. Tailor each cover letter to the specific job application to make it as relevant and impactful as possible.

How to write a good cover letter (with examples)

The best letters are unique, tailored to the job description, and written in your voice — but that doesn’t mean you can’t use a job cover letter template.

Great cover letters contain the same basic elements and flow a certain way. Take a look at this cover letter structure for ref erence while you construct your own.

1. Add a header and contact information

While reading your cover letter, the recruiter shouldn’t have to look far to find who wrote it. Your document should include a basic heading with the following information:

  • Pronouns (optional)
  • Location (optional)
  • Email address
  • Phone number (optional)
  • Relevant links, such as your LinkedIn profile , portfolio, or personal website (optional)

You can pull this information directly from your CV. Put it together, and it will look something like this:

Christopher Pike

San Francisco, California

[email protected]

Alternatively, if the posting asks you to submit your cover letter in the body of an email, you can include this information in your signature. For example:

Warm regards,

Catherine Janeway

Bloomington, Indiana

[email protected]

(555) 999 - 2222

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2. Include a personal greeting

Always begin your cover letter by addressing the hiring manager — preferably by name. You can use the person’s first and last name. Make sure to include a relevant title, like Dr., Mr., or Ms. For example, “Dear Mr. John Doe.”

Avoid generic openings like “To whom it may concern,” “Dear sir or madam,” or “Dear hiring manager.” These introductions sound impersonal — like you’re copy-pasting cover letters — and can work against you in the hiring process.

Be careful, though. When using someone’s name, you don’t want to use the wrong title or accidentally misgender someone. If in doubt, using only their name is enough. You could also opt for a gender-neutral title, like Mx.

Make sure you’re addressing the right person in your letter — ideally, the person who’s making the final hiring decision. This isn’t always specified in the job posting, so you may have to do some research to learn the name of the hiring manager.

3. Draw them in with an opening story

The opening paragraph of your cover letter should hook the reader. You want it to be memorable, conversational, and extremely relevant to the job you’re pursuing. 

There’s no need for a personal introduction — you’ve already included your name in the heading. But you should make reference to the job you’re applying for. A simple “Thank you for considering my application for the role of [job title] at [company],” will suffice.

Then you can get into the “Why” of your job application. Drive home what makes this specific job and this company so appealing to you. Perhaps you’re a fan of their products, you’re passionate about their mission, or you love their brand voice. Whatever the case, this section is where you share your enthusiasm for the role.

Here’s an example opening paragraph. In this scenario, you’re applying for a digital marketing role at a bicycle company:

“Dear Mr. John Doe,

Thank you for considering my application for the role of Marketing Coordinator at Bits n’ Bikes.

My parents bought my first bike at one of your stores. I’ll never forget the freedom I felt when I learned to ride it. My father removed my training wheels, and my mom sent me barrelling down the street. You provide joy to families across the country — and I want to be part of that.”

4. Emphasize why you’re best for the job

Your next paragraphs should be focused on the role you’re applying to. Highlight your skill set and why you’re a good fit for the needs and expectations associated with the position. Hiring managers want to know what you’ll bring to the job, not just any role.

Start by studying the job description for hints. What problem are they trying to solve with this hire? What skills and qualifications do they mention first or more than once? These are indicators of what’s important to the hiring manager.

Search for details that match your experience and interests. For example, if you’re excited about a fast-paced job in public relations, you might look for these elements in a posting:

  • They want someone who can write social media posts and blog content on tight deadlines
  • They value collaboration and input from every team member
  • They need a planner who can come up with strong PR strategies

Highlight how you fulfill these requirements:

“I’ve always been a strong writer. From blog posts to social media, my content pulls in readers and drives traffic to product pages. For example, when I worked at Bits n’ Bikes, I developed a strategic blog series about bike maintenance that increased our sales of spare parts and tools by 50% — we could see it in our web metrics.

Thanks to the input of all of our team members, including our bike mechanics, my content delivered results.”

5. End with a strong closing paragraph and sign off gracefully

Your closing paragraph is your final chance to hammer home your enthusiasm about the role and your unique ability to fill it. Reiterate the main points you explained in the body paragraphs and remind the reader of what you bring to the table.

You can also use the end of your letter to relay other important details, like whether you’re willing to relocate for the job.

When choosing a sign-off, opt for a phrase that sounds professional and genuine. Reliable options include “Sincerely” and “Kind regards.”

Here’s a strong closing statement for you to consider:

“I believe my enthusiasm, skills, and work experience as a PR professional will serve Bits n’ Bikes very well. I would love to meet to further discuss my value-add as your next Director of Public Relations. Thank you for your consideration. I hope we speak soon.

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Tips to write a great cover letter that compliments your resume

When writing your own letter, try not to copy the example excerpts word-for-word. Instead, use this cover letter structure as a baseline to organize your ideas. Then, as you’re writing, use these extra cover letter tips to add your personal touch:

  • Keep your cover letter different from your resume : Your cover letter should not duplicate the information on your resume. Instead, it should provide context and explanations for key points in your resume, emphasizing how your qualifications match the specific job you're applying for.
  • Customize your cover letter . Tailor your cover letter for each job application. Address the specific needs of the company and the job posting, demonstrating that you've done your homework and understand their requirements.
  • Show enthusiasm and fit . Express your enthusiasm for the company and position in the cover letter. Explain why you are interested in working for this company and how your values, goals, and skills align with their mission and culture.
  • Use keywords . Incorporate keywords from the job description and industry terms in your cover letter. This can help your application pass through applicant tracking systems (ATS) and demonstrate that you're well-versed in the field.
  • Keep it concise . Your cover letter should be succinct and to the point, typically no more than one page. Focus on the most compelling qualifications and experiences that directly support your application.
  • Be professional . Maintain a professional tone and structure in your cover letter. Proofread it carefully to ensure there are no errors.
  • Address any gaps or concerns . If there are gaps or concerns in your resume, such as employment gaps or a change in career direction, briefly address them in your cover letter. Explain any relevant circumstances and how they have shaped your qualifications and determination.
  • Provide a call to action . Conclude your cover letter with a call to action, inviting the employer to contact you for further discussion. Mention that you've attached your resume for their reference.
  • Follow the correct format . Use a standard cover letter format like the one above, including your contact information, a formal salutation, introductory and closing paragraphs, and your signature. Ensure that it complements your resume without redundancy.
  • Pick the right voice and tone . Try to write like yourself, but adapt to the tone and voice of the company. Look at the job listing, company website, and social media posts. Do they sound fun and quirky, stoic and professional, or somewhere in-between? This guides your writing style.
  • Tell your story . You’re an individual with unique expertise, motivators, and years of experience. Tie the pieces together with a great story. Introduce how you arrived at this point in your career, where you hope to go , and how this prospective company fits in your journey. You can also explain any career changes in your resume.
  • Show, don’t tell . Anyone can say they’re a problem solver. Why should a recruiter take their word for it if they don’t back it up with examples? Instead of naming your skills, show them in action. Describe situations where you rose to the task, and quantify your success when you can.
  • Be honest . Avoid highlighting skills you don’t have. This will backfire if they ask you about them in an interview. Instead, shift focus to the ways in which you stand out.
  • Avoid clichés and bullet points . These are signs of lazy writing. Do your best to be original from the first paragraph to the final one. This highlights your individuality and demonstrates the care you put into the letter.
  • Proofread . Always spellcheck your cover letter. Look for typos, grammatical errors, and proper flow. We suggest reading it out loud. If it sounds natural rolling off the tongue, it will read naturally as well.

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Common cover letter writing FAQs

How long should a cover letter be.

A cover letter should generally be concise and to the point. It is recommended to keep it to one page or less, focusing on the most relevant information that highlights your qualifications and fits the job requirements.

Should I include personal information in a cover letter?

While it's important to introduce yourself and provide your contact information, avoid including personal details such as your age, marital status, or unrelated hobbies. Instead, focus on presenting your professional qualifications and aligning them with the job requirements.

Can I use the same cover letter for multiple job applications?

While it may be tempting to reuse a cover letter, it is best to tailor each cover letter to the specific job you are applying for. This allows you to highlight why you are a good fit for that particular role and show genuine interest in the company.

Do I need to address my cover letter to a specific person?

Whenever possible, it is advisable to address your cover letter to a specific person, such as the hiring manager or recruiter. If the job posting does not provide this information, try to research and find the appropriate contact. If all else fails, you can use a generic salutation such as "Dear Hiring Manager."

Should I include references in my cover letter?

It is generally not necessary to include references in your cover letter. Save this information for when the employer explicitly requests it. Instead, focus on showcasing your qualifications and achievements that make you a strong candidate for the position.

It’s time to start writing your stand-out cover letter

The hardest part of writing is getting started. 

Hopefully, our tips gave you some jumping-off points and confidence . But if you’re really stuck, looking at cover letter examples and resume templates will help you decide where to get started. 

There are numerous sample cover letters available online. Just remember that you’re a unique, well-rounded person, and your cover letter should reflect that. Using our structure, you can tell your story while highlighting your passion for the role. 

Doing your research, including strong examples of your skills, and being courteous is how to write a strong cover letter. Take a breath , flex your fingers, and get typing. Before you know it, your job search will lead to a job interview.

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How to Start a Cover Letter - 4 Tips for the Perfect Opening

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Here you are, looking at a blank document that’s supposed to be your cover letter.

You have a general idea of what your cover letter is supposed to be about, but you’re having trouble writing those first few sentences.

We get you! Whether you’re writing your resume, an article, research paper, or a cover letter, getting started is sometimes the hardest part.

Lucky for you, though, there is a very straightforward way to get started with your cover letter, and in this article, we’re going to teach you how to do that!

Read on to learn how to effectively get started with your cover letter! 

  • What should your cover letter opening contain
  • What to include in your contact information
  • How to start a cover letter greeting
  • How to write an attention-grabbing opening paragraph
  • 6 Examples of how to start your cover letter

What Should Your Cover Letter Opening Contain

To successfully get started with writing your cover letter, you should include these 3 main elements:

  • The header with contact information. Includes your & the recipient’s contact information.
  • The greeting to the manager. This is where you address the cover letter by greeting the hiring manager, department, or company.
  • An attention-grabbing opening paragraph. The opening paragraph of your cover letter is your chance to grab the recruiters’ attention and get them to read the rest of your cover letter.

Below, we’ll teach you how to do each of them in the right way.

If you’re applying for an entry-level job and wondering what’s the best way to write your cover letter, head over to our article on entry-level cover letters . 

What to Include in Your Contact Information 

As we mentioned, the first thing to add to your cover letter opening is your contact information. 

The header’s essential information include the following: 

  • Full name and professional title (if applicable)
  • Phone number
  • Email (a professional email, that is)

In some cases, you can also add the following: 

  • Social media profiles. By this, we mean profiles that are relevant to the position. This includes websites like LinkedIn , GitHub (for developers), or Medium (for writers).
  • Personal website. If you have a personal website you’ve created for your industry (i.e. you’re a writer with a blog), then make sure to include the link to your website on your cover letter.

After you’ve added your information, you should add the date and continue with the recipient’s name and address. So:

  • Manager’s name
  • Manager’s job title
  • Company’s name
  • Company’s street address

Once you’ve done this, here’s what your cover letter will look like:

how to start a cover letter

And just like the essential DOs, there are also some things you should NOT include in your cover letter header: 

  • Unprofessional email. It’s going to be difficult for a hiring manager to take you seriously if your email address is something you coined when you were still a teenager (i.e. [email protected] ). 

How to Start a Cover Letter Greeting

After you’ve properly listed your contact information, it’s time to start writing your cover letter. 

The first thing this includes is addressing the cover letter to the hiring manager. 

Yeap, that’s right! And by greeting the hiring manager, department, or company, we don’t mean using the old-fashioned “Dear Sir/Madam,” or “To whom it may concern.”

Instead, you want to show your future employer that you’ve done your fair share of research about the job/company and that you’re not just using one cover letter template to apply for ten jobs. After all, one of the most common mistakes job seekers do (84% of them!) is not finding the hiring manager’s name and personalizing the application.

So, make sure to address the hiring manager that’s going to review your manager directly. 

Now, there are a few ways you can do that. 

The simplest - and most obvious - option is to look up the head of the department you’re applying to on LinkedIn. 

Let’s assume that you’re applying as a Communications Specialist at Novoresume. The hiring manager is probably the Head of Communications or the Chief Communications Officer. 

After a quick LinkedIn lookup, you can probably find out who that person is (that’s me!). 

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And just like that, you have your hiring manager! Piece of cake!

Not a fan of LinkedIn? You can also check the company’s website and look for the “Team” or " About Us " page.

If none of these work, consider using one of the following greetings when you’re addressing the hiring manager: 

  • Dear [Department] Hiring Manager,
  • Dear Hiring Manager, 
  • Dear [Department] Team,
  • Dear Director of [Department],
  • Dear [Company Name] Hiring Team

How you conclude your cover letter is just as important as how you start it. To learn how to ace yours, head over to our guide on how to end a cover letter . 

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How to Write an Attention-Grabbing Opening Paragraph

The last, but the most important, part of your cover letter opening is your opening paragraph. 

You want your opening paragraph to be engaging and attention-grabbing to ensure that the hiring manager will continue reading the cover letter.

After all, recruiters receive hundreds of applications daily. Obviously, they can’t spend all their working hours reading cover letters, so, instead, they simply skim your cover letter in a handful of seconds, and if it catches their attention, they re-read it more thoroughly.

And the part of the cover letter that helps catch their attention is usually the opening paragraph! 

Compare these 2 cover letter openers and judge for yourself which one you’d rather read:

Dear Mr. Brown,

My name is Anna and I’d like to help your company exceed its sales target as a Sales Manager. My 5-year experience as a Sales Representative at XYZ Inc. has given me substantial skills in sales. During my last year working there, we beat KPIs by around 50%. I believe that my strong track record in sales makes me the perfect candidate for the position. 

Hello, my name is Mary and I am interested in working as a Sales Manager for your company. I have 6 years of experience working as a Sales Manager for Company X, so I think I’m a good fit for the position. 

While there’s nothing inherently wrong with the first example, it’s not all that imaginative. Chances are, every other applicant is going to use a similar opening statement.

The second example, on the other hand, is more customized and personal, helping the recruiter understand why Anna is a good candidate for the role.

In this section we’ll give you all the tips & tricks you need to ace your cover letter introduction:

Tip #1. Show Passion and Commitment

Showing the hiring manager that you’re passionate about the job will instantly boost your chances of getting hired. It’s not a secret that committed employees are more engaged and, therefore, more productive.

After all, research shows that engaged employees are 17% more productive than their peers.  

So, it’s only logical that the hiring manager will greatly appreciate a candidate who shows commitment and enthusiasm. 

As such, these are both qualities that you want to showcase right from the start of your cover letter. Here’s an example of how you can do that:

I have been immersed with human rights since I specialized in Conflict Resolution and started working with Amnesty International. During my 5 years of experience in the field, however, I haven’t seen any organization do the work that you’ve accomplished with human rights. Your dedication makes me want to work for your organization and put my skills to use for the work you do. 

Tip #2. Mention a Mutual Contact (if Applicable)

If someone referred you to the position, the opening paragraph of your cover letter is a great place to mention that. 

Referrals are key to securing an interview, but at the same time they’re not something you can mention on your resume, so take the opportunity to let the recruiter know at the start of your cover letter. 

The idea is that if someone the hiring manager knows recommended you for the position, your skills and qualifications immediately become more credible.

I was excited to learn about this job opportunity from John Doe, who has worked at your firm for five years. John and I worked on an architectural project together for over one year and he thought I’d be a good fit for the role at Company X. 

Tip #3. Prove You Have Researched The Company 

A generic cover letter will not give you many points in the eyes of your potential employers. 

The recruiter reading your cover letter wants to know that you’re excited to be applying for that particular company , and you’re not just applying to dozens of jobs randomly, hoping that one will stick. 

As such, it’s very important to do some research about the company you’re applying for, and in the cover letter, mention why you’re a good culture fit. 

I have always admired the work that your organization does with vulnerable communities. I have always been passionate about social justice and I think the mechanisms you have in place to empower those in need are really making an impact. I believe my previous experience as a social worker could bring value to your mission.

Tip #4. Lead With An Achievement

There’s no better way to grab attention than to lead with an achievement. It immediately gives you credibility and makes the hiring manager curious to read more about you. 

To make sure your achievements stand out, though, do this:

  • Whenever possible, make your achievements as quantifiable as possible. “Improved sales by 20% in 2 months” is more impressive than “improve sales.”
  • Show how your past achievement is relevant or can add value to your current position. 

As a Public Relations representative for Company XYZ, I worked with the press to improve its reputation and public image. This translated into a 40% increase in customer satisfaction and better public reception of the company’s values and identity. I am eager to yield the same results as the Head of Communications in your organization. 

Tip #5. Start With a Powerful Belief

A short and impactful belief statement that represents your work ethic and professional values is another great way to attract the recruiter’s attention. Obviously, you get bonus points if said belief statement aligns with the company’s goals and objectives. 

However, don’t just copy-paste the company’s mission statement to make a good impression. Rather, use your own words and beliefs to sound more genuine and original.

As a teacher, I believe every child should have access to quality education early on. This is the only way to ensure future generations’ equity and the best chance we have at improving our society. I admire your institution’s commitment to enabling quality education in the most remote areas of our country and I’d be honored to contribute to those efforts by becoming a teacher here. 

Tip #6. Be Direct  

Oftentimes, beating around the bush gets you nowhere. So, a great strategy to follow when you start writing your cover letter is to just be direct about the position you’re applying for and the reasons you believe make you the perfect fit for the job. 

There’s another upside to this. Recruiters receive hundreds of applications daily - sometimes, even for different positions within the same department - so it helps them to know what position you’re applying for early on, as well as what exact qualifications make you the perfect fit for the job. 

I’d like to officially apply for the marketing manager position at Company X. Over the past 7 years, I’ve worked with 6 clients, helping them drive more than $2,000,000 worth of sales. I am confident that my marketing skills and proven sales results make me a perfect match for the position. 

Match your cover letter with your resume to make a better impression on the recruiter and reinforce your personal brand !

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Key Takeaways 

And that’s a wrap! 

Hopefully, you’re now more confident about how you can start your cover letter!

Now, let’s do a small recap of the most important points we covered in the article:

  • Your cover letter opening should contain a header with contact information, a greeting to the hiring manager, and an attention-grabbing opening paragraph.
  • Your header should include your contact information, such as your name, phone number, and professional email, the date, as well as the contact information of the recipient.
  • You should try to find the hiring manager’s full name in order to greet them. If you can’t find their name or title anywhere, then you should greet them using Dear Hiring Manager , Dear [Department] Team , or something similar.
  • The opening paragraph of your cover letter should grab the hiring manager’s attention and make them want to read your cover letter. Some tips to write an attention-grabbing opening paragraph include being direct, starting with a strong belief statement, or leading with a relevant achievement.

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How to start a cover letter: 5 great opening lines

5 min read · Updated on March 21, 2023

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Grab attention and impress, right from the start

When you apply for any job, one of the very first tools you'll use to grab the attention of employers is your cover letter. Yes, there are of course companies that are so big that they don't have time for cover letters - but plenty of HR Managers at small and mid-sized companies do read them. A cover letter highlights the reasons you're the best person for the job and how you will benefit the company. It also demonstrates your ability to effectively communicate your  unique value proposition. That's why the opening lines of your cover letter are so important ‒ you need to hook the employer so that they want to continue reading and learn more about you.

There's no one right way on how to start your cover letter , but there are a few techniques that you can try to make your letter stand out. Here are five ways to write the opening lines of your next cover letter:

1. Job title and accomplishments

This is a very common and effective way to start a cover letter. The idea is to get straight to the point and impress the employer with your background. Use your most impressive and most relevant accomplishment stories to explain your worth.

Example: As a Social Media Coordinator for Company X, I manage many digital media outlets. By implementing new social media marketing tactics, in the past year, I have doubled our audience on Facebook and tripled our followers on Twitter.

2. Excitement means dedication

Another approach is to begin your letter by expressing your excitement for the job opportunity. If there's a job or a company you're particularly enthusiastic about, it's great to say so. When a potential employer sees you're excited, this translates into how motivated and dedicated an employee you would be. This makes them want to find out if you're as qualified as you are eager.

Example: I was excited to find an opening in human resources with Company Y, because your work with XYZ [be specific] has been important to me for a long time. I am the perfect candidate for this position because it combines my experience in human resources and XYZ.

3. Keywords, keywords, keywords

When applying for a larger company where you know an applicant tracking system will be used, a smart idea is to make your opening lines keyword-heavy. The right keywords will make sure that your cover letter gets read and will immediately highlight many of your most relevant skills.

Example: Written and verbal communications are two of my strongest areas of expertise. Through my years of experience in public relations, I have perfected my skills in social media, media relations, community engagement, and leading a team. It is the combination of these skills that make me the best candidate for your Public Relations Manager position.

4. Network ties

If someone in your professional network refers you to a position, company, or specific HR Manager, the best approach is to use this right away in your cover letter. Name-dropping your mutual contact will provide the employer with a point of reference to go from. They'll be interested to see why your character reference  thought you'd be a good fit for the job.

Example: My name is Jane Doe and recently I spoke to your Communications Coordinator John Smith, who informed me about the opening in your IT team. He recommended I contact you about the job because of my strong interest in the field.

5. What's in the news?

Another unique option to impress employers is to demonstrate your knowledge of current events in your opening lines. Look for recent news about the company you're applying for and tie it into the job opening. Explain why the news item makes you think you'd be best for the job.

Example: Recently, your company has been highlighted in The Huffington Post and Forbes because of your partnership with Charity Z. After reading those articles, I became inspired to seek employment opportunities with your company and was happy to see an opening for an Administrative Assistant. As someone with vast experience in that area, I would be the perfect candidate for the job.

With all of these options, it's important to tailor your entire cover letter to your specific experience and each individual job description. A personalised cover letter is essential to prove your qualifications and will be more likely to result in an interview, so start making changes to your cover letter today!

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Editor's Note: This article originally ran on Glassdoor UK . It is reprinted with permission.

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4 Best Cover Letter Opening Lines to Make a Mark in the First Paragraph

Elena Prokopets

Do you feel that writing a cover letter opening paragraph is always the hardest part? 

Who would have thought that you could agonize so much over two to three sentences? First, you are struggling to come up with an appropriate cover letter greeting. Then there you want to make a catchy hook. But end up writing what every other applicant does — “This is my cover letter for [Position Name] at [Company Name]”. 

So you are probably wondering what you can do to get the reader at hello (pun intended)? In this guide, we’ll provide you with several pro tips and best cover letter opening lines examples to accomplish just that. 

But first, let’s get some basics out of the way.

What is the Best Greeting for a Cover Letter?

The best greeting for a cover letter is *drum roll* — Hello [Person Name]. 

Yeah, that’s nothing fancy. But the research of some 300,000 business emails found that simple salutations like “Hey”, “Hi”, and “Hello” drive the highest open rates. 

So go with either of the above, depending on the level of formality adopted in the organization. For example, if you are applying to an educational position, it’s best to use a more formal “Hello”. But starting your letter with “Hi [HR Name]” or “Hi [Team]” is seen as acceptable by companies with a more relaxed culture. 

Pro tip: If possible, subscribe to the company’s newsletter. Then check out how they are greeting prospective customers. Then use the same type of greeting and mimic their tone of voice for your cover letter . 

4 Great Cover Letter Opening Lines: Examples + Tips 

We know that you’ve come looking for actual cover letter opening line examples. So no more intros! Below is our line-up with quick recommendations when each opening will work best. 

1. Share an Accomplishment 

The easiest way to wow the reader straight off the bat is by throwing in a serious accomplishment . Show that you are a motivated go-getter, eager to make things happen.

For example, you can open your cover letter for a sales position like this: 

“In 2020, I’ve attracted over $5.4 million in new business for my current employer — Pharma Inc. Most of them were from the Midwest — the market your organization is looking to enter”. 

By opening your cover letter with such a bold and boastful line you accomplish two things:

  • Instantly show that you are qualified
  • Make the reader picture what you can do for their company 

Both of the above factors get the reader hooked to continue reading your cover letter and curious to learn more about your qualifications.  

Works best for: 

  • Management 
  • Hospitality 
  • Executive positions 

2. Drop a Name 

The purpose of a cover letter is to introduce your persona to the reader and help them learn a bit more about your character, personality, and professional qualities.

An easy way to foster an immediate sense of “connection” is by mentioning someone they know who you know too, aka your connection to the company. 

Dropping such a connecting statement instantly feeds into our association bias — the tendency to transpose associations from a past fact to a present. For example, we tend to link high prices with better quality. Similarly, our brain also associates the positive qualities of a referee with a referral. And this fact makes name-dropping so powerful. 

For example, you can open your letter with this statement:

“I’m referring to [position name] as per the recommendation of Josy Gilbert, an Adjunct Professor at your institution and once a Ph.D. supervisor of mine.” 

Don’t have a direct connection to the company? Don’t worry! You can also build up an association link by mentioning an interaction with the company recruiter or employee, bringing up a fact about the company leadership, or name-dropping your current employer if they are a big name in the industry.  

  • Finance 
  • Healthcare 
  • Creative industries 

3. Share Your Passion 

Every employer wants to see eager, motivated people with sparkling eyes, rushing around the office premises (or checking in via Slack). 

And that sentiment makes perfect sense. Research found that calling-oriented workers (people with a great passion for their work) are more satisfied and successful at work than those who primarily work for money. So there’s less turnover. 

You can show that you are this person too. Here’s a sample passionate opening for an internship cover letter : 

“Since I was five, I have been writing short cover stories and asking my Mom to find a publisher for me. Now, I represent other aspiring writers (of legal age) and get them deals with the best publishing agencies in the country”  

  • Recent graduates 
  • Interns 
  • Career transitioners
  • Design 
  • Creative professions 
  • Social work 
  • Customer service 

4. Use Flattery

Sharing your fascination and appreciation for the company you are pitching can help you get your foot into the door. Let’s be real: everyone loves a bit of flattery. But to be impactful, your gushing sentiment has to be genuine and concrete. It’s not enough to say that “I love what you do”. Instead, you have to come up with a way to connect your skillset with the interest in the company operations.

Here’s a sample opening line doing just that:

“When I first entered the Sama Brand flagship store in NY, my first thought was: can I stay to live here? Your merchandising team has meticulous attention to curating your furniture in a way that says “home”. So instead of secretly squatting at your store, I went to check the open jobs, so that I could spend more time at your amazing space”. 

  • Retail 
  • Marketing 
  • Service industry 

The Best Opening Lines for a Cover Letter are Those You’ll Come Up With! 

Don’t get caught up in putting down the perfect opening paragraph from the first try. Leave it blank and work on the body of your cover letter instead. Then circle back to writing that opening.

And if you are still stuck, check out more cover letter examples we have on our website!

Elena Prokopets

Elena runs content operations at Freesumes since 2017. She works closely with copywriters, designers, and invited career experts to ensure that all content meets our highest editorial standards. Up to date, she wrote over 200 career-related pieces around resume writing, career advice... more

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Great Opening Lines From Cover Letters

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As the saying goes, you only get one chance to make a great first impression.  While we’re pretty sure our mom was more concerned keeping her children from embarrassing her in front of friends when she doled out this sage advice to us as youngsters, the saying is more than applicable when it comes to the search for your new career-making job position.  

With the advent of online job applications and recruiter submissions for vacant listings, the professional cover letter is fast becoming a lost art.  While overlooked by many applicants, starting off on a great foot with a killer introduction to your skills and experience can go a long way in pitching yourself as the best candidate for the position.  We’ve dedicated other articles to the skills needed in crafting a cover letter as a whole but pitching yourself in the very first lines can often be an art in itself.  Job-seekers should buckle up; we’re about to take you on a wild ride into the world of good, great and absolutely fabulous opening lines for your next cover letter submission.

The Case for Short and Sweet

Recruiters, hiring managers and other employment professionals are often strapped for time.  Juggling multiple deadlines for individual work projects along with interviewing for that open position, one of the most valuable traits a candidate can pitch to a prospective employer is a quick and concise overview of why they’ll be a good fit for the available role.

Job-seekers should use this knowledge to craft a brief and concise opening pitch that spells out the who’s, how’s and why’s of their application.  Avoid excessive wordiness or long and elaborate tales of your job history.  Employers want to know what you have to offer and why you would be a great fit in a single sentence.  And by sentence, we don’t mean one of those paragraph-long monstrosities that Ms. Periwinkle warned you about way back in sixth grade.  One to two lines is all you should need to make your case.

Sell Yourself

Now that we’ve talked about length and format, it’s time to nail down the content requirements.  When it comes to awesome opening lines on your cover letter, there are a few solid approaches to consider.  

First off is what we like to call the “candidate capsule” approach.  In this form of opening, a candidate will include a quick snapshot of their career, qualifications or overall job skills.  If you’re an avid book or newspaper reader, consider this as the headline synopsis of your resume.  “Experienced candidate with xyz certifications” is an example of a perfectly acceptable, concise and forward approach.  Other ideas along these lines include: “X years of experience in the abc field,” or “candidate with a proven track record in y fundamentals.”

If you’re short on experience, or simply looking for an alternative way to open and pitch your candidacy, the “why I’m interested” line is also a viable alternative for opening your cover letter.  In one sentence, pitch to the prospective employer what interests you about the position, company, pr job description.  This approach will queue in hiring managers that you’ve read the job description and performed the necessary due diligence on the role and company.  As a concrete example, open with a statement such as: “Candidate interested in the leadership, managerial and innovation skills the xyz position will build.”  Candidates could also highlight individual qualifications or job duties as potential reasons for their interest in the position.

Make them want to Hear More

Whether you open with one of the above, or your own personally-developed approach, your opening line should grab the attention of the recruiter or hiring manager.  Avoiding generic or throwaway statements along the lines of “my name is” will be crucial to keep those in decision-making positions interested in what you have to say.  

Candidates looking for a leg up shouldn’t shy away from attention-grabbing tactics such as utilizing a bit of professional humor or inserting key industry catchphrases in order to gain the upper hand over other qualified candidates.  The trick is to set your cover letter, resume and overall candidacy apart from the competition while still appearing qualified for the individual job listing, whichever individual track you decide to take.  

Article Updated from the Original on October 21, 2017

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When to use a business cover letter.

A resume will only get you so far in a job hunt. Any time you submit a job application, you should include a business cover letter to accompany your resume. Think of it as a proposal to the hiring manager as to why you’re a good fit for the position.

Some clubs and organizations, especially mission-driven organizations, ask for cover letters from prospective members. They might want to see why you’d be a beneficial member who could further their mission before allowing you to join, which is the perfect time for a business cover letter.

Finally, you might want to include a cover letter if you plan to apply for a certification program. Some certifications have prerequisites. A business cover letter, along with your resume, is a great way to showcase your skills and that you’ve met all the requirements to earn the certification.

Download a free business cover letter template.

Not sure where to begin? Whether you’re looking for business cover letter examples for inspiration or want an outline to get started, you can download a free cover letter template online.

Once you download the template, you can convert the PDF to Word to customize the information to suit your skills and experience. You can also edit the PDF online to add text, leave sticky notes, and more.

To give you some ideas, here’s a quick business cover letter example of what you might want to make yours look like:

San Jose, CA | [email protected] | 123-555-4564

Dear Jane Doe, VP of Human Resources

I came across your job posting for an Account Executive on the Company website, and given my extensive business background, I believe I would be an asset to your organization.

For the past seven years, I have worked as an Account Executive for Big Business, LLC., handling dozens of accounts from businesses both domestic and abroad. I have a certification in Business Development from the ALCOP, and I am also proficient with all major project management software, including Jibberjab, Smile, and Wink.

In addition to my business background, I am a strong communicator with experience leading small teams to achieve set goals within projected timelines.

My schedule is flexible, and I would be interested in setting up a time to discuss the Account Executive position further. Thank you for your time, and I look forward to speaking to you.

Tips to write a business cover letter.

A business cover letter is a balancing act between covering as much information about yourself as possible while keeping it short, so it’s easy for hiring managers to read.

Always use professional language. In a business setting , efficiency is key. Hiring managers read through many applications and don’t have time for fluff. Keep your business cover letter short and straight to the point. Highlight your strong points as quickly as possible.

Be sure to proofread your cover letter for mistakes before sending it. Nothing comes off as more unprofessional than a typo in an important business letter.

Once you’re happy with the final result, remember to save your business cover letter as a PDF. PDFs maintain their formatting regardless of device. You can easily convert Word to PDF online to transform your cover letter into a sharable document that’s ready to send to hiring managers.

The best business cover letter format.

There are several differences between generic cover letters and business cover letters. Overall, business cover letters should be more professional, both in tone and layout. Similar to a standard business letter, professionalism and conciseness is key here. But rather than sell products or services, you’re selling your skills and experience.

To keep your cover letter on track, here’s an outline of the important information and sections to include in your business cover letter template:

  • Personal information – Start your cover letter with your name, email, and telephone number at the top of the page in a block format. Address or city is optional.
  • Date – Every business letter should be dated. Add the date under your contact information.
  • Salutation – Greet the hiring manager. Include their name and perhaps even their job title, just to show you’ve done the research.
  • Opening paragraph – Explain that you’re interested in the position and how you heard about the opening. Include the exact job title.
  • Second paragraph – Provide a summary of your relevant experience and critical hard skills that make you the best person for the job.
  • Third paragraph : Briefly discuss the soft skills that would make you an asset to the business and a good team player.
  • Closing paragraph : Let the hiring manager know about your availability to discuss the job further. Thank the hiring manager for their time by name.
  • Signature – End the letter with a professional signature.

You should also use a business cover letter format that’s clean and in a block format, with a highly legible font. Use single spacing and keep your margins consistent to maintain a business feel. The easier it is for a hiring manager to read your cover letter, the better.

Frequently asked questions.

Should i write a new cover letter for each application.

Each cover letter should be specific to the job you’re applying to. However, you can create a business cover letter template that covers basic information and quickly customize it before applying to a job to save time creating letters from scratch.

How long should a cover letter be?

Your cover letter should be three to four paragraphs, or approximately 250 to 400 words. Always try to keep it to one page.

Is a cover letter the same thing as a CV?

While they are both very similar, a cover letter isn’t quite the same as a CV. CV stands for curriculum vitae, which focuses mainly on academic achievements. Cover letters focus on professional experience. In the business world, cover letters are preferred.

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